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Open Poetry #24

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BlueEyes
Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 152
TX, USA

0 posted 2003-02-03 10:32 AM

You really shouldn't have....

    Kissed me so softly,
        Caressed me so gently,
             Held me so closely,
                  Explored me so deeply,
                      Accepted me so willingly,
                           Loved me so passionately,



        Because now I've fallen,

                   And
                      don't
                         want
                             to
                               get
                                  up.....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-03 11:10 AM

BlueEyes
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

2 posted 2003-02-03 11:42 AM

I enjoyed this too!!!

Neeraja

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

3 posted 2003-02-04 08:17 PM

I enjoyed this keep up the good work.

andrea

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2003-02-05 07:19 AM

*smiles*--there are times when falling actually feels good--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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