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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-01 10:47 AM

And as the moon draws near,
Pulling to our desires as roughly
As a tide -

Tell me,

What do you ask for?

Whisper
To
Me.

Or should I trace the words,
Silent from your lips...a taste so full,
So sweet -
It hangs with pleasure
In the air.

Tell me,

What do you pray for?

Whisper
To
Me.

Or should I read this mystery
That lingers in your eyes,
And breathing close to you...should I whisper
Something back?

Tell me,

What do you ask for?

And together...we will whisper secrets
To the moon.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-02-01 11:00 AM

Eric,

I love this. So soft and sweet.

Welcome to Passions. Can't recall other poetry of yours but, I look forward to reading more. Enjoyed.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-02-02 09:07 AM

Shhhh....
can you hear them?

The secrets
are becoming known...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-02 09:22 AM

Oh this is as shoft as a whisper...
Beautiful...just beautiful.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-02 05:04 PM

(sigh) Oh Eric, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always whisper such smiles and happiness together to your sweethearts heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-02-2003 05:04 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-02 05:08 PM

Eric, this is really beautiful...just my kind of poem. You probably know by now that I'm one of the "hopeless romantics" here, and I do love romantic poems.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-02 05:11 PM

I listen... how I listen... and we whisper together to the moon. She knows what I ask for... Her light embracing me, Her windy kisses answer my desire... my fervent prayers have been heard- upon a whisper, carried straight to the heart of God. And She truly listens...

Thank you...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-02-03 01:36 AM

beautiful writing!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2003-02-04 01:33 AM

Eric~
This is just lovely.
Such a tender write and it literally whispers.
Wonderfully done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Barbara Trautman
Member

since 2002-10-23

Posts 90

9 posted 2003-02-04 01:41 AM

Long last your love! Should it always remain so sweet.... Live long, love hard and write beautiful poetry. Barb

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