Open Poetry #24 |
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Rise above |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
RISE ABOVE Destroyed in a heap of vile No way to shake the demons Disgraced beyond belief A feeling of nothingness Confused, scared, afraid, alone That’s the fear inside Beat all hate within Because inner fear is your worst enemy Like the sands of time You must learn to move Don’t be silent and still Like a ship in the desert Negativity never helped anyone Positively helped all overcome Darkness will fall upon you If you fail to rise above |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Optimism and a smile take us infinitely farther than foundering in the dregs of our lives... Nicely said, Sun.. ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful advice! Eric |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Beautifully said... Thank you... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very true words you've written here. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all must rise above...great write! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sun~ What Nan said. This is beautifully done. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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