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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-01-31 09:52 PM



The sun whispers,
" This is how it's done."

And falls to the hands
Of dusk -
Surrendering to the night.

The moon sighs,
" This is how it's done."

And folds within
Waiting arms -
Embraced in a lovers kiss
Of dawn.

I ask you,
" This is how it's done?"

As I turn to your
Touch...falling,
A thousand different ways.

You catch me...and whisper in my ear,
" This is how it's done."






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1 posted 2003-01-31 10:07 PM


OH WOW!!  This is beautiful..exquisite!
I love this!  Ohhhh myyyy yesss.
Softly sensual and oh so romantic.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-01-31 10:16 PM


Ericc - Wonderful words that paint a beautiful picture in my mind. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-02-01 03:36 AM


this made me smile warmly
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4 posted 2003-02-01 06:29 AM



Now I have to go find your first post, and give you a most proper Welcome to Passions!

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