Open Poetry #24 |
Forever February |
Martie
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Forever February All along the edge of night she silent slips with ancient ways with toss of head sends mauve to dark this art work is the sky and more belabor not the trust she has that turn of hand can bring sun down Come February now the time of mourn she stops to ponder not warn or wasted from so much night and day how display the color of the way it feels to leave beloved flying over hills to stay forever along the mist that tears have made She knows this space from every year has come to feel the callus it has wept and contemplate the ways to pull the paint to make a backdrop compliment the grief and some relief the beauty caught define like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair The time is near now she can feel the strain though it remains eclipsed the brightness fades then opens new a page of month of days so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend forever February into love again |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
forever |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, sweet Martie - pulling at my heartstrings once again. Precious little angel face. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Martie,? Many, many warm hugs to you...so heart touching to say anything is almost to tarnish the perfection and beauty. Love and strength to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-30-2003 07:36 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Never ever forgotten....your Michelle. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Michelle wrapped this with a bow, and then kissed your cheek... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-30-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie~ My words could never express what my heart feels while reading this beautifully sad poem. Just know that your words have touched my heart greatly. Be careful if it is time to take that trip to your special place...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just lovely, Martie - There's nothing else that can be said... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*tears* and forever (((HUGS))) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All along the edge of night she silent slips with ancient ways with toss of head sends mauve to dark this art work is the sky and more belabor not the trust she has that turn of hand can bring sun down ========================================= She knows this space from every year has come to feel the callus it has wept and contemplate the ways to pull the paint to make a backdrop compliment the grief and some relief the beauty caught define like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair The time is near now she can feel the strain though it remains eclipsed the brightness fades then opens new a page of month of days so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend forever February into love again ================================ You will already know what the title of this means to me... I dont think there will ever be a time I can look at that pic and not get emotional...so many times I have felt her in your words...and also felt your healing and your cherish of the time you had. The traces left behind become treasures and turn poetry into versed legacies of love. I truly lack the words to tell you the beauty of this poem and the way it made feel...but then you already know...words arent needed. Love you Martie-girl. If made to choose between the power of writing a poem |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how special are the poems that you share Michelle with all of us. A little girl never to be forgotten and and wonderful woman who shares the memories and love with us. This is a lovely poem - Paul |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie sweet Martie, Oh how you tug at my heart strings. You don't know but my daughter was born in February. The 19th will be my first birthday without her. I have no idea what it means to lose one so young. But my heart aches at the thought. Yes indeed it is forever February...and I will always say... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Martie, these are beautiful memories. --Elizabeth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I almost made it. Almost made it all the way through.....you know the rest. Ye move me, lass. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Martie, sweetie, I didn't make it all the way through. This touched my heart very deeply. This picture is so beautiful of both of you. I just don't know what else to say. She's a little Angel now, watching over her Mother....... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I still remember what you said MLP, about had she grown into the life she deserved... my thoughts are with you through this difficult difficult month... love you lots K |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Martie, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I'm so sorry again for your loss as she deserved so much more, but know that know she is always watching over you, so lucky to forever have a loving mom, you, in her heart! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, A special month, a special day, in fact February is my birthday. Beautiful |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you for these heart felt replies. February is a special month for me...packed with memories punch, but also its joy. I look forward to it as much as I dread it. Thank you for supporting me each year as I write of her. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
youre fetish with february brings out your poetic abilities :smirk: come february, and .. now this? damn, youre killing me here! -chris. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris--And it's not even February yet...I'm sure there will be more, not because I want to kill you, but because I want to save myself. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Grief will be replaced with soft memories as each new day begins...I have you in my prayers.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I couldn't read this again if I had to...for my eyes could not handle the flood |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
it thats a lot to leave me at a lost for words but reading these words I don't know what to say... except that this is both powerful and beautiful. All along the edge of night she silent slips with ancient ways with toss of head sends mauve to dark this art work is the sky and more belabor not the trust she has that turn of hand can bring sun down got hips like cinderella must be having a good shame talking sweet about nothing |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And in my heart you will always be for what you are is also me never lost, never gone as the wind brings me your love's song And in the memories, no one leaves...very gentle smile |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Martie, I get the most awfullest feeling reading this. Best wishes to you. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Soft, gentle...a quiet kind of beautiful.... "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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