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Tender Tones
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Tender Tones |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Tender Tones Stand away from the black and white of your time, no need to decide, for this moment, right or wrong up, or down, in, or out, step away, and examine tender tones in shades of gray, embark upon your drift past tentacles of grasp, beyond snags of life, toward a tranquil time, where shape and shadows quiver, weaving a warmth into your awareness, and you realize, how minute you are in the universe, how grand you are to a dust mite, and how, here, in tender tones and shades of gray, you are loved, by one. To all of Passions’ Poets, I thank you for every time You share yourself with me. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's all relative, isn't it?... Rarely black and white... Nicely penned, Sunshine...  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - this is a  for sure!! How wonderful your words are. Thankyou for sharing with us!!! hugs, Chris"Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And you thought you just might slip past your 32,000th post with this beauty?! Not as long as I'm around you can't!  Congratulations dear poetess/friend/joined at the hip sister! We are so blessed to have you grace these blue pages with your exquisite writing and wonderful replies. ~Hugs, Smiles & Cheers, Nancy Lee~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea---You are very special!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The shade of grey to some means blurred...but it is really soft and blending...just like this poem..Congrats on posting 32000!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Uhhhh...that is only FOUR times what I have posted here at PiP....quite an accomplishment. It has been a pleasure reading you, knowing you and sharing with you through the 16 months that I have been walking the halls. Congratulations KJ....many more please.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey sweet Lady, You have once again written a beautiful work of art. You have so much talent, Karilea. I always enjoy reading your poetry and your replies, too. And I thank you very much for sharing your poetry with us. . . Congratulations on 32,000 posts, too. That's a lot of reading and writing, and I hope you can do much more, friend.......   "Love makes the world go around" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Another excellent gem from your hand, it is always a pleasure to read you Karilea. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, Sunshine.....I love the shades of gray, and stepping away from the harsh reality of black and white! Just like life, there are undertones, if we but choose to look. A truly happy person is one who |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
"how minute you are in the universe" On a day like today, we do really feel what a humble portion of the universe we know. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Mijn lief once told me on a difficult day, that there is not only black and white... there is so much grey in between... This poem brought me back into his arms for a moment... Thank you Sunshine!!! Neeraja |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
liked the tone, the mood and the acompanying picture, - well done. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done my friend... shades of blend producing dim.... enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
how minute you are in the universe, how grand you are to a dust mite I love that!  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gosh Karilea, this brought tears and hugs to my heart. You are indeed a special poetess. Huggles, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dear friend, I've always perfered to see things in shades of gray rather than in black and white. How often our sight is jaded when we try to make distinctions that way (black or white). Excellent write |
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