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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-03 09:17 AM










(This is one of many of my Candy Heart poems which I will be posting till Valentines Day which I wrote starting in 2001 to represent Conversation Heart messages! Hope you love them! )



MOON BEAM
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/02

Waltz in the moon beams with me
Under Eros's chandeliers
Slip on your crystal slippers sweetly
I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears

We'll make love in these showers of moon beams
Sipping through the jasmine night
We'll climb pyramids of passion lovingly
Embracing the soubrette cupid twilight

Upon agate shores of our dreams
We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes
As I rest with you on these sands of kersey
Lying in loves hammock with you in the moon beams, in lovingly wake

Come and dance with me in the moon beams
May your honeyed words drip from your lips in amore
Meet me in the moonlight, my darling
We'll sway in heavenly kiss betwixt moonbeams galore















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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1 posted 2003-02-03 09:27 AM


Noah,
Now that's a pitch if I ever read one.
You should get a net full with this. LOL

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2 posted 2003-02-03 09:53 AM


Oh, Noah, this is simply beautiful. I'll dance with you under the moon beams. Let me see..now..whatever shall I wear? Something flowing that will twirl and shimmer as you waltz me around. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-02-03 10:00 AM


Noah - thanks for the wonderful heartfelt poem - you express the emotion so well - Paul
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4 posted 2003-02-03 04:30 PM


Now I am ready for Valentines day!
Thanks...this is beautiful.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-03 04:34 PM


Very beautiful Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2003-02-03 04:37 PM


Hey!  My sister doesn't get ALL the dances with you...
Save a few for me sweetie.
Love this...sure do.
~Hugs~

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7 posted 2003-02-03 05:27 PM



Romance is in the air! What woman wouldn't love to receive a "Candy Heart Poem" such as this!

Warms hugs!!
EA

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8 posted 2003-02-03 05:38 PM


Noah,

Thank you for sharing that lovely poem! It is very heartfelt and true. You have such a kind heart and you are a good poet.

Love,

Andrea

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9 posted 2003-02-03 05:48 PM


Fabulous Noah and the graphics are sensational.

Huggles, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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10 posted 2003-02-03 07:08 PM


enjoyed
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11 posted 2003-02-03 07:36 PM




Noah,

I love this. It is beautiful, and already your dance card filling up. Save one for me...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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12 posted 2003-02-03 08:10 PM


Noah - now that's a magic touch if I ever read one. Nice to see you upbeat...

BC

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