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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Suggestion There is a place I can suggest. A place that I have favor best A fantasy of midnight strolls. With wishes free without the tolls. It is a place of lovely scenes. Where flowers grow by every means A place of knights and ladies fair A place where you can share a dare It fills a wile or nightly dream. It could a sad or lovely seem. But that is up to your impel To me I like the jasmine smell. I weave my mind the play in dream. And then I lay me down with seem. And let to fly a snow-white dove. And there before me stands my love. Impossible you laugh and chide? If not for this I would have died. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - I love your place of fantasy... You've always got something special there for us...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Just awake from a dream and onto the pages of blue How beautiful Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you sweet, love you too.  Thank you dear Elizabeth, you are one of my fantasies. Sy |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Lovely poem. I like the second stanza. Wonderful release, reading this is like floating on a billowy cloud, carefree. Good suggestion; enjoyed this much. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Good morning and thank you dear. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
wonderful, sir! y'done it again and made a good poem, keep doing that! I like your wit at the end. And all the love and joy laced center. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (01-31-2003 08:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alyssa You are very kind, thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! A fantasy of a read you have conjured up for us this morning Sy! You do have that magic touch when it comes to weaving flights of fantasy. (Tea's on) ~Morning Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: I'm keeping this one! I think you just made my Friday... Good morning, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Love your tea, love your hugs.  Sunshine You bring the sun to my day. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I had to read your joy and wisdom, with a bit of magic, before I left this morning to go to my parents house. I'm glad that I did.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you and your a pleasure to write for. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--You are lucky to have the key to this magic fantasy.  |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
thanks for inviting me, i enjoyed the visit. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie There are as many keys as people, LOL. christian You welcome and thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And might I suggest strongly you always hold onto this beauty, for God sakes hang onto it! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are hope to many, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nothing is impossible |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, Mr. T., you may be surprised to know that just before reading this poem, I had "annointed" myself with 100% pure jasmine essential oil!--I believe I may have been to your special place on a few occasions!... Sweet dreams, good knight! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I'll try, thank you. passing shadows I would agree, Earth Angel And sweet dreams to you my dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It fills a wile or nightly dream. It could a sad or lovely seem. But that is up to your impel To me I like the jasmine smell. I weave my mind the play in dream. And then I lay me down with seem. And let to fly a snow-white dove. And there before me stands my love. ======================================== Ahhh yes, Jasmine...and Gardenia...and Peach Vanilla and Raspberry cream... mmmmm A Garden of Eden we can eat LOL And then I lay me down with seem. and could that line be any cooler???? I do so love the sanctuary of your rhyme scheme dreams Sy-babes, tames even the wildest Randy dragon's beast LOL *ww* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I knew you would come if I waited long enough. LOL Now I can go back to sleep. WWRS |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Symour, This is so very soothing and beautiful. Thank you. Oh to dream and dream and dream. Peace to you! SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold Thank you for the read and nice reply. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
enjoyed the peek into your magical place!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Enjoyed your peek. |
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