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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-01-31 07:26 AM


Suggestion

There is a place I can suggest.
A place that I have favor best
A fantasy of midnight strolls.
With wishes free without the tolls.

It is a place of lovely scenes.
Where flowers grow by every means
A place of knights and ladies fair
A place where you can share a dare

It fills a wile or nightly dream.
It could a sad or lovely seem.
But that is up to your impel
To me I like the jasmine smell.

I weave my mind the play in dream.
And then I lay me down with seem.
And let to fly a snow-white dove.
And there before me stands my love.

Impossible you laugh and chide?
If not for this I would have died.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2003-01-31 07:35 AM


Sy - I love your place of fantasy... You've always got something special there for us...
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2003-01-31 07:37 AM


Just awake from a dream and onto the pages of blue
How beautiful
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-01-31 07:41 AM


Nan,
Thank you sweet, love you too.

Thank you dear Elizabeth, you are one of my fantasies. Sy

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4 posted 2003-01-31 07:52 AM




Sy,

Lovely poem. I like the second stanza. Wonderful release, reading this is like floating on a billowy cloud, carefree.

Good suggestion; enjoyed this much.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-31 07:59 AM


Pat,
Good morning and thank you dear.

GG
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6 posted 2003-01-31 08:10 AM


wonderful, sir!
y'done it again and made a good poem,
keep doing that!

I like your wit at the end. And all the love and joy laced center.  

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (01-31-2003 08:10 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-01-31 08:29 AM


Alyssa
You are very kind, thank you.

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8 posted 2003-01-31 08:51 AM


Wow!  A fantasy of a read you have conjured up for us this morning Sy!
You do have that magic touch when it comes to weaving flights of fantasy.
(Tea's on)
~Morning Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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9 posted 2003-01-31 08:53 AM


quote:
It fills a wile or nightly dream.
It could a sad or lovely seem.
But that is up to your impel
To me I like the jasmine smell.

I'm keeping this one!
I think you just made my Friday...
Good morning, Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-01-31 09:01 AM


Nancy,
Love your tea, love your hugs.

Sunshine
You bring the sun to my day.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-01-31 10:16 AM


Seymour, I had to read your joy and wisdom, with a bit of magic, before I left this morning to go to my parents house. I'm glad that I did....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-01-31 11:52 AM


garysgirl
Thank you and your a pleasure to write for.

Martie
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13 posted 2003-01-31 12:20 PM


Sy--You are lucky to have the key to this magic fantasy.  
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14 posted 2003-01-31 12:23 PM



thanks for inviting me, i enjoyed the
visit.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-01-31 12:36 PM


Martie
There are as many keys as people, LOL.

christian
You welcome and thank you.

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(sigh) And might I suggest strongly you always hold onto this beauty, for God sakes hang onto it! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are hope to many, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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nothing is impossible
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18 posted 2003-01-31 01:17 PM


Well, Mr. T., you may be surprised to know that just before reading this poem, I had "annointed" myself with 100% pure jasmine essential oil!--I believe I may have been to your special place on a few occasions!...

Sweet dreams, good knight!

EA

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-01-31 01:43 PM


Noah,
I'll try, thank you.

passing shadows
I would agree,

Earth Angel
And sweet dreams to you my dear.

Janet Marie
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20 posted 2003-01-31 03:38 PM


It fills a wile or nightly dream.
It could a sad or lovely seem.
But that is up to your impel
To me I like the jasmine smell.

I weave my mind the play in dream.
And then I lay me down with seem.

And let to fly a snow-white dove.
And there before me stands my love.
========================================


Ahhh yes, Jasmine...and Gardenia...and Peach Vanilla and Raspberry cream...
mmmmm A Garden of Eden we can eat LOL


And then I lay me down with seem.

and could that line be any cooler????

I do so love the sanctuary of your rhyme scheme dreams Sy-babes, tames even the wildest Randy dragon's beast LOL

*ww*




Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-01-31 04:03 PM


JM,
I knew you would come if I waited long enough. LOL Now I can go back to sleep.
WWRS

SimplyGold
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22 posted 2003-01-31 06:30 PM


Symour,

This is so very soothing and beautiful. Thank you. Oh to dream and dream and dream.

Peace to you!

SG

Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-01-31 06:42 PM


SimplyGold
Thank you for the read and nice reply.

Sandpiper
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24 posted 2003-02-01 07:39 AM


enjoyed the peek into your magical place!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Seymour Tabin
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25 posted 2003-02-01 07:51 AM


Sandpiper
Enjoyed your peek.

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