Open Poetry #24 |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
I know I'm to young to be alone. I hope that the best years aren't gone. We dance in a circle on and on. Gently we hold, but so fierce and strong. I hold you closely and feel it start. That fimilar beating in my heart. I thought it turned to stone. But still afraid to be alone. Here we are face to face. Scared because of this place. Holding on for sanity sake. Praying that the stone does break. Both know we're to young to be alone. Hoping that the best years aren't gone. We dance in a circle on and on. Gently we hold, but so fierce and strong. As we dance the ice melts away. I feel the warmth as we sway. I've not felt like this in ages. This memory does turn times pages. Back to a diffrent time and place. Where you now stand was another face. We danced at a much faster tempo. And the worlds turn was slow. Both thought we're to young to be alone. Hoping that the best years weren't gone. We danced in a circle on and on. Gently we held, but so fierce and strong. [This message has been edited by Ada'doLisdo'ti (01-30-2003 02:00 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ada'doLisdo'ti A good write, enjoyed the read. |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
It's nice to find a good dance partner that might become more. No need to dance alone. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoyed the repetitiveness of specific lines, Ada'... it does carry the beat of a long-lost tune, and read under the right conditions could make one feel a little dizzy... one more time around, please... |
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