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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-30 10:54 AM


If the world ends
What you would do?
Would you take my hand?
Make the things alright
If the world ends
Would you stay with me?
All night long
Would you sing a song to me?
A song
That frees my soul away
Take away
All the pain
BrIng the rain tonight
Let us hold hands
Wash away
Every tear
Bring everything Into happiness
If today
Is over
There wIll be always tomorrow
Even though
The world Is falling apart
We will be always toghether
If the world ends
What will happend to us?
Do you think
We can hold on
To the time?
If the world ends
Would you take my hand?

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-30-2003 05:19 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-01-30 10:55 AM



Yes.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-30-2003 10:55 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-01-30 11:35 AM


perhaps if we took the hand of the one next to us...the world ending would be much less of a thought...


paladin
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3 posted 2003-01-30 11:42 AM


Reminds me of the song by Bread titled "If".

paladin

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regards2you
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4 posted 2003-01-30 12:01 PM




Rest assured, you'll always be safe in God's arms....

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-01-30 12:14 PM


My sentiments exactly.  Beautiful piece of poetry here!  

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

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6 posted 2003-01-30 01:01 PM


beautiful vandana...what a deep thinking poem
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7 posted 2003-01-30 01:06 PM


Wonderful work here Vandana.
and...YES, I would take your hand.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-01-30 01:11 PM


Vandana, this is so beautiful...the way you wrote it and
the thoughts. In fact, it's a


By the way, all of us here will hold your hand....          

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-31 03:39 PM




(smiles) I would happily take your hand and give you a friendship hug, dearest friend! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-01-31 09:10 PM


sad and sweet,
if it ends, i hope we have some warning, so we can be run home and be with the ones we love

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