Open Poetry #24 |
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If The World Ends |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
If the world ends What you would do? Would you take my hand? Make the things alright If the world ends Would you stay with me? All night long Would you sing a song to me? A song That frees my soul away Take away All the pain BrIng the rain tonight Let us hold hands Wash away Every tear Bring everything Into happiness If today Is over There wIll be always tomorrow Even though The world Is falling apart We will be always toghether If the world ends What will happend to us? Do you think We can hold on To the time? If the world ends Would you take my hand? [This message has been edited by vandana (01-30-2003 05:19 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes. ![]() [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-30-2003 10:55 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps if we took the hand of the one next to us...the world ending would be much less of a thought... |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Reminds me of the song by Bread titled "If". paladin |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Rest assured, you'll always be safe in God's arms.... Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
My sentiments exactly. Beautiful piece of poetry here! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful vandana...what a deep thinking poem |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful work here Vandana. and...YES, I would take your hand. ![]() ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, this is so beautiful...the way you wrote it and the thoughts. In fact, it's a ![]() By the way, all of us here will hold your hand.... ![]() ![]() ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I would happily take your hand and give you a friendship hug, dearest friend! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sad and sweet, if it ends, i hope we have some warning, so we can be run home and be with the ones we love |
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