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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-30 10:01 AM


Cathedral of pines
Roaming among wind swept trees
I am not alone


paladin

....a knight without armor

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1 posted 2003-01-30 10:03 AM



Pines soughing whispers
spirits talking through the leaves
wisdom on the wind

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2 posted 2003-01-30 10:16 AM



        
         trees of ageless sight
   shelters from the storms of time
         pines with God's clear view
                              
        

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3 posted 2003-01-30 10:58 AM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2003-01-30 12:43 PM



This is peacefully beautiful.

Enjoyed, Pat

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5 posted 2003-01-30 12:46 PM






(smiles) I too have that feeling like I'm being watched when being monitored by mother nature and father time, I guess you just have to have instincts like the birds and the bees to find your way down the golden path! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

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6 posted 2003-01-30 12:53 PM


Pines stand sentinel
Holding forest's heart in bough
Meeting strength from roots

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7 posted 2003-01-30 12:57 PM



When pine trees whisper,
The moon lowers her white lamp~
Leans down to listen.

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8 posted 2003-01-30 12:58 PM


beautiful
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9 posted 2003-01-30 01:31 PM




Beautiful!!!

Charisma

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10 posted 2003-01-30 01:51 PM



.
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As the pine trees lean
To listen to our whispers
The pine cones fall off
.
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11 posted 2003-01-30 01:54 PM


paladin
Good one, enjoyed.

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