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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-01-30 01:18 AM


Empty Space Blues

Through my pen
My lonely heart yearns
Each passing day
Where nothing returns

To write you again
Becomes obvious why
I am reaching out  
Before my ink runs dry

Heart distress calls
In needing some clues
Is the end in sight
Of empty space blues

You always inspired
Filled my heart and soul
Loiter on memories
Before the credits roll


Hope ©2003

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1 posted 2003-01-30 01:59 AM


sad smile
HopeS
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2 posted 2003-01-30 02:52 AM


Hey thanks , yes heart emotions at the moment are in between sad and smiling

Hope

Nan
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3 posted 2003-01-30 10:03 PM


And yet... inspiration's in your muse with some lovely words...
HopeS
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4 posted 2003-01-30 11:43 PM


Thanks Nan , yes his inspiration used to make my nothing days worthwhile , times when I could smile
Hope

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5 posted 2003-01-31 02:12 AM


Hope, this is pretty and sad at the same time. I hope all is well....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-01-31 02:17 AM


Thanks  for your caring thoughts Ethel
on and on life goes , this was just one of my lows
Hope

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7 posted 2003-01-31 08:02 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Hope, this is a bittersweet lament, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I hope now loves blessing fills your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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