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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-29 12:21 PM

Bits And Pieces

~~*~~
One rose can
a moment make
brings willingness,
mine, yours in take

A petal falls
each time you're near
in want of more
in loss of fear

~~*~~

A piece of me
in peace of you
views hidden needs
in eyes of blue

But eyes of mine
seek times of more
in depth of blue
like once before

~~*~~

Time holds truth
for those who know
these little bits
of mine that show

Pieces, small
I hold to tight
in keeping warmth
your feel, each night.

~~*~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-01-29 01:19 PM

Touching...even to a heart of stone.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-01-29 01:41 PM

and does that mean you have a heart of stone?

*s
M (thanks)

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2003-01-29 04:00 PM

This is very lovely, Maureen.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-01-29 04:36 PM

Thank you Michael, I hope you are feeling well.

hugsss
M

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-01-29 04:43 PM

this flowed nicely,
and is quite beautiful

enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-01-29 06:43 PM

~M~

These are so lovely. I liked them all.
Very nice!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2003-01-29 06:48 PM

These are very nice, Maureen.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-01-29 06:54 PM

enjoyed

Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member

since 2001-12-05

Posts 49
somewhere at the edge

9 posted 2003-01-29 07:01 PM

Well spoken, words so true ...
  of moonchild, of winter,
    and a Lady I once knew.

        Every bit, every piece, Maureen

                    Alyays
                      *S*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-02-03 11:18 AM

Alyssa, Pat, Sue and vandana thank you

And Shadowed_Innersense,
I caught the "you" before it expired

Thank you for the rhyme...and I don't recall this name but I like it.
hugs
M

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