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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-01-28 08:28 PM

“IN FOREVER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If your bed should be cold,
when the winds blow in haste,
I would take you within me,
into a gentle lover’s embrace…

If your pillow should be soft,
as your bosom is most fair,
my head would I lie down,
soft thoughts would I bare…

If your words would be of three,
mine you would know of the same,
in forever would they stay here,
as I softy whisper your name…
~~~~

Tari Miriel
Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

1 posted 2003-01-28 08:32 PM

Bill Charles,

Special three,
words strong and gentle;
a treasure~

Lovely, soothing poem~

Tari

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-28 08:33 PM

Bill, this is so beautiful. I love it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-28 08:38 PM

Very beautiful and so romantic.
~hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-01-28 09:29 PM

Warmth is sounding GOOOOOD... BCI..

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-01-28 11:24 PM

This is a lovely poem.I liked it

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2003-01-29 04:45 AM

Bill.... this is such a beautiful poem!!!

Sigh...

I loved it!!!

Neeraja

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-29 05:06 AM

whew...wow

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-01-29 07:04 AM

smooth, as usual, you do make the women swoon, you romantic wordweaver

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2003-01-29 07:17 AM

Ahhh, this is lovely Bill.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

10 posted 2003-01-29 06:05 PM

Bill,

"As I softly whisper your name"....

Yes, that did it! I'm swooning....

Enjoyed. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-01-29 06:06 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-01-29 06:57 PM

enjoyed

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

13 posted 2003-01-29 09:07 PM

..Bill Charles../\.soft and loving poem.i enjoyed reading..

../\..Spiros
-------------calm seas----------

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2003-01-29 09:24 PM

Very tender and emotive work here Bill.
Smiling at ya. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2003-01-31 03:01 PM

(sigh) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love that feeling of an eternal flame existing in ones heart! (big hugggssssss) Sorry for my belated response, I had a blast at the Shakira concert Tuesday and was working hard Wednesday with children, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-31-2003 03:01 PM).]

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