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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-01-29 07:15 PM

“SEARCHING FOR YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Once in the early dawn
I was surrounded by green
giants, and then in the
afternoon I saw the sun
gracefully touch the
waters of a lake which
looked like glass,
and in the late evening
I saw moonbeams form
shadows in the night...

I was searching for you through
the morning, afternoon,
and evening until I
found you, and then we lay
on a blanket of leaves,
and I was lost into you…
~~~~

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

1 posted 2003-01-29 07:28 PM

great poem...your a very good writer...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-29 07:47 PM

Bill - very romantic!!Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-29 07:54 PM

Another beautifully romantic poem, Bill......

I loved it, as always....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-29 08:49 PM

bill is this deja vu all over again?
it seems like i DID read this, or did i just dream its loveliness?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-01-29 09:24 PM

I really liked the image of the sun on the lake, like glass!

Sounds like a perfect day in every way.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-01-29 10:10 PM

This does sound like a heavenly place, BCI...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-01-29 11:04 PM

Oooh so romantic Bill.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-30 02:21 AM

nice...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-01-31 03:07 PM

(sigh) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, still catching up from my absence at the Shakira concert! (big hugggsssss) May you always find splendor in true love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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