Open Poetry #24 |
A Grandmother's Wishes |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Grandmother's Wishes A grandmother’s wishes are simple and few But they carry the truth that could help see you through If you listen you’ll hear as she’s waving good-bye The most delicate message that passes you by No need for a star, her request to beseech Just a little advice she’s attempting to teach But you leave without pondering the richness of heart That bestows you a gift just before you depart “My love for you always will be just the same” Then she kisses your cheek as she whispers your name And you fail to acknowledge she means deep inside That the person you are is the source of her pride No matter your failures no matter your choice No judgment is rendered within her sweet voice What she tried hard to tell you before you left home Was be true to yourself and the love of your own See the beauty of life, feel the vastness of love Know that all souls entwine under heaven above A grandmother’s wishes are simple and few Her love’s unconditional, solid, and true Elizabeth Santos 1/28/03 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unconditional...and...it doesn't bear on blood ties...I know. This is beautiful, Lady Santos, and I thank you for sharing a grandmother's heart... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A grandmother’s wishes are simple and few Her love’s unconditional, solid, and true" How true this is! Exactly how I feel about my grandchildren. Much enjoyed dear Elizabeth. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--This gave me goosebumps...that's a good thing. Truely lovely! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed it is, dear Liz... Aren't munchkins the best?... I know your beautiful verse certainly is... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Elizabeth, this is so beautiful, and true. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so true . Thanks for shareing this |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I still remember and have saved all the wonderful letters from my German grandmother who lived with us, and they were written in her accent, of course. Many were a lifeline to me when I was far from home. I could tell her anything because grandparents don't judge you. No matter what, she always said it would turn out right in the end, not to worry. Thank you grandmothers and grandchildren for your comments Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Elizabeth, this deeply touched my heart, though I am still a small pup, I understand how my grandmother loves me so much and I love her so much and I never wish to take a minute for granted to listen to her and remember her smile as I know soon her time will come and I want to know all the love in her heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I miss my nana |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Lovely, and I'm (sob) wiping away tears because, although I'm a Grandma now, I still really miss my own Grandma who, at age 91, passed on almost six years ago. She was the one person with whom I could share almost everything... Now when my daughter complains about her almost teenage son (because he's being a normal pre-teen boy), I just laugh, because to me he's just wonderful (and it's payback time!!!) Lovely write!! Sheila Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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