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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-01-28 03:37 PM

The spill of morn, a stirring spawn
of silent weep in brimming tears.
Whence once reborn at wake of dawn
where darkened sleep allays one’s fears.

On whisking flight of angels soar
as whispers mending softly start..
A guiding light laps water’s shore
and moonbeams blend the blood of heart

Glimmer the beams of crescent moons
where dark stars burn in gaseous flames
in swirl of streams from twirling spoons
and spawning fires of countless blames.

Our sins replay in windless glide
as humans fall the deep cold depth.
This avalanche we slip and slide
when souls recall our secrets kept.

Groping to feel at every turn
shadows and shapes of spoken words.
The kindled minds so quickly learn
when twirling spoons a voice is heard.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

1 posted 2003-01-28 03:45 PM

very nice write magnus

I especially loved the last lines

hugs, Kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-28 04:37 PM

Hi Barry...

I loved your poem, as always.

Hey, I've been missing you around here. Hope all is well....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-01-28 04:40 PM

I love the twist and turns of your words Barry...this is very good *s
hugss
M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-01-28 04:44 PM

Wonderful dear Magnus!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-28 07:22 PM

Excellent write Barry!
I've missed you!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-01-28 07:25 PM

Now where have you been keeping yourself,
and from which pocket did you pluck this?

He's back.
Thank goodness!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-01-28 08:15 PM

Barry--

"Glimmer the beams of crescent moons
where dark stars burn in gaseous flames
in swirl of streams from twirling spoons
and spawning fires of countless blames."

Beautiful!

Tari Miriel
Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

8 posted 2003-01-28 08:19 PM

Magnus,

a beautiful,
spinning,
twirling,
flowing
song~

Tari

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-01-28 09:04 PM

Barry,
You are changing, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-01-28 09:32 PM

Wasn't the same here without you dear poet...this is merely the next chapter in your masterpiece. ThisDiamond

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

11 posted 2003-01-28 09:40 PM

Seeing the spoons twirling about as I read... Very nice, P.I....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-01-29 04:08 AM

wonderful!

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

13 posted 2003-01-29 04:31 AM

What a beautiful use of words!!! I am impressed!!!

Neeraja

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