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Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22
Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-28 03:13 PM


~I believe~

No matter what the tides bring,
The songs that no one will sing,
I still believe that,
There is still something left for us,
Something more to be seen,
I believe,
That there is love in the end of it all,
That we have only been tested,
To stride on never to fail,
As I believe,
That we,
In the end,
Will find love,
Find that one that we so dearly want to find us,
Our Knights,
Our Ladies,
The ones we so dearly hope for,
The ones we so dearly wish for,
But do not forget that all of the above,
Comes in many different forms,
Not all and not everyone is as you see,
And might be more,
Thus I believe in true love,
Thus I believe all hope amount to something,
And all of our dreams that seem to have been forgotten,
Have only yet to be true,
But in the end,
When it comes down to deaths kiss,
And drawing blood over lonelyness,
While the entire world may seem like it enjoys painful restings,
And the flowers of love have all been crushed,
I still see true love,
I still believe in all that is right,
I believe.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

© Copyright 2003 Joel J. Harrington - All Rights Reserved
abbe
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since 2003-01-20
Posts 131
michigan, usa
1 posted 2003-01-28 03:41 PM


enjoyed your poem... and

you're right!  love comes in many forms and shapes... and just because it doesn't fit the popular romantic pattern does not mean it is not "true"...

good luck in finding your Lady

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-01-29 12:37 PM


Anything is possible and love will find a way.

Why should we believe otherwise,
and put out the fire that is such a
vital part of our lives!

Enjoyed your thoughts pb~

  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-29 04:01 AM


faith is all you need! good write, I needed this
Neeraja
Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
4 posted 2003-01-29 04:32 AM


Smile... I am a believer too!!!

Enjoyed your poem!

Neeraja

Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22
Posts 84
Canada, BC
5 posted 2003-01-29 11:14 AM


I'm glad you all liked it, and that it was, hopefuly, thought prevoking enough to keep some of you in beliefe.  But, in anycase, thanks for your comments.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

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