Push Play! -- attempt at minalism

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Open Poetry #24

Push Play! -- attempt at minalism

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-01-28 11:11 AM

                             Push Play!

                             abraised sky-blue shingles
                             pigmented more
                             than heavens

                             silence
                             awaiting
                             sun’s glimmer
                             of life

                             lonely
                             stillness
                             resides

                             on pause

                             Push play!

                             ©January 27, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (01-28-2003 11:12 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-01-28 01:14 PM

Ooooh nice one Virginia!
Enjoyed this!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-01-28 02:11 PM

Far too many of us tend to push that pause button... I agree - PLAY...

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2003-01-29 01:56 PM

I pushed the rewind button and played it agin.It got better the second time.

paladin

....a knight without armor

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-30 03:14 AM

nice!

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

5 posted 2003-01-30 06:42 AM

Very insightful...if only we could all remember to press the play button instead of keeping the pause on...or even the stop for that matter. Great job on this one.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-01-30 08:03 AM

like it alot!
*fumbles for the play button of her own life*

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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