Open Poetry #24 |
Windows and Memories |
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Windows Show the memories Where cottage sat With best friend waiting. All night watching, Working, caring. Windows Are my eyes. Where I am hiding. Thoughts are lurking. Teardrops safely Lulled by joy. Windows, Just a memory. No cottage left Nor best friend waiting. Work alone, Through night unfolding. Windows, Shaken eyelids. Kept closed Transfixed by tasks And taken silently To thoughts of Memories. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
I enjoyed this quiet respite, sitting by your soul window~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, This is dynamic and deep. Almost brought tears to my eyes. Enjoy your writing. Hugs and blessings to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Tari, Glad you enjoyed it. The soul window is an a painful and beautiful place to perch and look upon Pat, it almost brought tears to mine too.. ahh no, it did. Its interesting to look at how different things correlate, because they certainly do in our minds. Glad you enjoyed. Have a blessed day, hugs Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
really a different view,thru the windows perception |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GG, this is very good. I enjoyed reading... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have always thought that way...this is a very good write! I really like this! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
inkedgoddess, thanks for reading and replying. I wasn't sure if it was different or just voiced.. well, rather penned. Ethel, glad you enjoyed! And thank you. Its not my greatest in a literalical (think I just made that word up) stance.. but it means alot to me personally Dixie, The one thing I can't stand about the computer is not being able to see the eyes of those I'm talking to, and them not seeing mine! Glad you enjoyed Thanks Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (01-29-2003 06:01 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Alyssa, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, always hang onto those memories that bring a glow to your heart and let them come, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Noah, thanks for the sweet reply Much appreciated. And yes, aren't memories amazing? Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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