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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-25 08:38 PM



Hide me
Past the deep
Of the moonlit
Crystal’s edge.

Take me deeper,
Higher.
Past the senses,
To gleam of
Light through
Smoky shadows.

Show me,
Lead me, by
The existence
Dearly held
When awakening
Is peace, unveiled
To reality’s edge.

And guide me there,
To loving comfort,
Bathed in clouds
Of truth.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

© Copyright 2003 GG - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-01-25 09:52 PM


GG - I'm glad I stopped by to read this. It is very lovely...

BC

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-01-25 09:56 PM


Very nicely done. ThisDiamond
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-25 09:58 PM


This is beautiful. I really
enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-01-25 10:39 PM


beautiful and zenlike, i love it
Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-01-25 10:44 PM


Very very nicely done...and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

GG
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6 posted 2003-01-26 01:44 AM


Bill,
I'm glad you stopped by too. And glad you replied. Thank you

ThusDiamond,
Thank you!

Ethel,
Thanks much! glad you enjoyed.

inkedgodess,
I love to see the beauty..amidst the pain.

Enchantress,
glad you enjoyed! Nice to think you thought it was nice!

God's blessings to you each
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-26 04:40 AM


wow! I wanna go too!
regards2you
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8 posted 2003-01-26 10:48 AM




Alyssa,

Very lovely. A well written,wonderful meditational ~peace~.
Hugs and love, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Salty
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9 posted 2003-01-26 11:05 AM


Absolutely Beatiful

sounds like a nice place to be guided to...scoot over, I'm coming with ya. *S*


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

GG
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Lost in thought
10 posted 2003-01-26 11:31 AM


Dixie,
Come with me!! I love company.. usually thank you

Pat,
I love meditation.. and seems needed especially at times. And the peace God brings with it really is amazing. Thank you.
Love And hugs.


Salty,
sure! just grab on and we'll fly, if you help me listen to direction that is! Thanks much.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

vandana
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11 posted 2003-01-26 11:42 AM


enjoy your read
Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-01-26 06:57 PM




(sigh) Oh Alyssa, this is lovely, sweet friend, I hope you find this special place of inner-peace and you always dig deeper into the happiness, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2003-01-26 09:08 PM


A beautiful view of the other side. What else can a guy say?

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  Dare To Dream
  Any Dream From
The Approved List
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GG
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Lost in thought
14 posted 2003-02-03 03:16 PM


Vandana,
thanks
I'm glad you enoyed!

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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Lost in thought
15 posted 2003-02-03 03:18 PM


Noah,
Thank you,
the peace I get, though, comes from the Lord.
Sometime I just focus on other things and reject it.
Thats when I notice more pain.

again, thanks
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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Lost in thought
16 posted 2003-02-03 03:19 PM


ratleader,
For a guy you've done good sir! lol
I'm glad you find it beautiful
thank you much

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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