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Open Poetry #24

A Heart's Thorn

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-01-28 05:34 AM

When longing for
upon open sleeve
nothings for sure

just believe

Deeper than arms
in a quiet place
such hidden charms

one must face

With time and need
and an ill-love warn
such pain takes seed

a heart's thorn

Take special care
to finding a way
without a tear

let love stay

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-28 07:40 AM

oh ouch..
kind of bittersweet.
hard to know when its worth it sometimes.
Enjoyed.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Tari Miriel
Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

2 posted 2003-01-28 07:55 AM

Yes, just believe.

Lovely~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-01-29 12:42 PM

A heart's thorn goes hand in hand with the rose.

Your writing is precious and so very hopeful.

Nice~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-29 04:00 AM

enjoyed this very much Craig...smile

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-01-31 01:59 PM

(big hugggsssss) Thus it brings us to the next point, that love will have sharp edges, but it is those that make true love, and a growing love stronger than ever if able to be overcomed! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-01-31 02:03 PM

Awesome write - enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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