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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-01-26 07:37 PM

Peace
is in your arms

alone

with voices that trail behind
in a murmur

of mist

that don't matter

or in our minds

~exist~

Alone
and only US

takes paramountcy
principle

in my souls garden
of stars

you led me outside
to see

unaware that you

have left me
lost for words

imperfection kisses my eyes

whole
and natural

we are.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-01-26 10:00 PM

Very pretty flowing down the page. ThisDiamond

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-01-27 02:50 AM

Very pretty gemjop...every word of it!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-27 04:31 AM

simply beuatiful,,,flowing down the page...great stuff tonight!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2003-01-27 07:10 AM

An exceptional garden, and an exceptional write.

... a natural talent!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-01-27 07:52 AM

Very nicely done, gemjop...

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Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-27 11:50 AM

Gemma, this is really pretty. I enjoyed reading it. Hey, I've been missing you.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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