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About Five O'clock
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About Five O'clock |
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Thisman Junior Member
since 2003-01-21
Posts 19 |
I caught TS Eliot slipping out the back door stop you skinny bastard look at these approximations I have duplicated your morose dictums I can reproduce at will such mournful ravings get away from me he said you're sick yes I know you've been telling us that for years we're all sick no you fool we were beautifully tragically sick you however have the sickness of a small man I met cleaning a theater in Abilene who believed that his soul was damned because his mother was adulterous you're all just alike I told him and one day you'll get yours he busted me in the nose and roared off with Sylvia Plath who was wearing tiger pants and driving a convertible |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interesting concoction of fantasy and reality. I liked it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
~snort~ Thinking of the connections between Sylvia and Eliot...great now I want to run off and do research heh... This is good stuff...  K |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now this is what I call concentrate! Excellent write! ThisDiamond |
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