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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
escaping from a week too busy to stop or think about anything i dangle precariously on a precipice of tears holding back a flood from what i know not wishing for something that might have been and never will i dig my nails into some hidden laughter clinging to present content and refuse to want more for fear i’ll drown in a torrential downpour of unfulfilled wishes grasping to find my center in what is here now real and full of good i will not indulge in useless self pity turn up the music it's time to dance |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Like this a great deal. Good attitude while it works...you captured many a week of mine, past and present. Enjoyed. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
abbe Good thought, good write, good read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Going Happy Mutant on us, eh? We will slap you with a trout for that...... A nice little poem, and perfect for a Saturday morning! ------------------- |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, I like the attitude you've got in this poem. Keep it up, girl......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed... "That kind of music just soothes my soul..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
selfpity can only go so far, i know too |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write..much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this a lot! Positive attitude goes a long way! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
"i dig my nails into some hidden laughter clinging to present content and refuse to want more" these are my favorite lines in it. Though I like it all! Positive is wonderful.. if you're really feeling positive that is. Too much fake hurts. Beautiful! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed the read very much! Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very well written and I like the positive attitude. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Really enjoyed the message of this write, thank you so much for sharing it with us here. Pepper |
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