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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2003-01-26 04:30 PM



Today, rain falls
briskly, to the ground
as the sun light dances on
the ground.

  Rainbows everywhere
I look to see beautifully,
  Rainbows here and there

Even as the rain falls,
I'm happy as can be,
running to the rainbows,
dancing in the clouds.

raindrops falling from,
the blue sky singing around,
me, in rich puddles

like a bluebid sings
gazing down,
many meadows
rich and brown!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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1 posted 2003-01-26 04:44 PM


this is utterly done....enjoyed it very much

Charisma

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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2 posted 2003-01-26 04:45 PM


Thank You.

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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