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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-01-26 02:01 PM


Reality reminds me more each day
Even as I write your memory with me stays
Agony of shattered dreams remain always
Remembering our love pass' the hours away
Rearranged dreams of me and of you
Accepted the fact that my world is blue
Never will my love fade this is true
Gone away but not forgotten
Every night I
Dream of you


Dreaming we are together
Renewing our hearts spoken vow
Each night I hold you with me there
Arranging us together even now
Memories of our love beckon to me
Sadly I awaken; seems dreams are stronger...than reality

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-01-26 02:05 PM


between night and dawn
the reality of you
comes true,if only in a dream........
sometimes the dreams help for a while

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
2 posted 2003-01-26 02:08 PM


dreams and reality...you captured your feelings quite well

((hugs))
Charisma

Pezz1
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3 posted 2003-01-26 02:25 PM


Knowing the power the dreams of my love hold over me i enjoyed this write. thank you
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-26 02:26 PM


I agree...good work Dennis
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5 posted 2003-01-26 04:12 PM


Yes, Dennis, dreams do hold a lot of power when one's Love isn't right by their side....for whatever reason........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-01-26 04:18 PM


You know, thats true. Sometimes I just never want to wake up. Not die, but you know.... YOue reminded me of those dreams.

I am living proof that ghosts exist. Which is an oximoron but I don't care ;)

SimplyGold
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7 posted 2003-01-26 05:03 PM


Dreams confused with reality. Powerful medicine.

Good write

SG

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