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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-26 03:02 PM

scattered along
the ocean's edge,
her many treasured shells,

fallen beneath
the reach of the tree,
her long ago nurtured leaves,

bursting through,
the womb of the clouds,
her labor of gathered tears,

resonating beyond,
this star-crossed love,
my undying faith in you

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-26-2003 07:06 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-01-26 03:16 PM

very soothing Michele, undying faith is very important.

M

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2003-01-26 03:18 PM

kept me going till the end

and going and going

still going

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-26 04:02 PM

Michele, this is really pretty. I like the way you did it,
and I like the thought of "undying faith" in someone...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-26-2003 04:06 PM).]

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

4 posted 2003-01-26 05:19 PM

Inkedgoddess,

This is very pretty. Enjoyed.

SG

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-01-27 02:33 AM

Love the calm in this Michele...
I could almost picture camping out at the beach
and sleeping under the stars,
the last verse sewed it up nicely.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-27 04:13 AM

I wish I could have undying faith again...I have seen too much though

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-01-27 07:59 AM

Makes me want to go out collecting shells...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2003-01-27 08:25 AM

It is nice to be able to have this kind of faith in someone.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2003-01-27 11:42 AM

This was nice Michele....but who do you have undying faith in, besides yourself. I can tell you are getting stronger!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-01-27 04:47 PM

giving you another lift..to warm my soul.

It is sooo cold again here today, with another dusting of snow...and I am sure not much better there.

*s
M

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

11 posted 2003-01-28 04:20 PM

beautiful iamgery

resonating beyond,
this star-crossed love,
my undying faith in you

got hips like cinderella must be having a good shame talking sweet about nothing
cookie i think you're tame" The Pixies

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2003-01-28 04:57 PM

love the imagery and nature analogies you used to define the emotions.
well done poetess Inked

Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky.
We fell them down and turn them into paper that
we may record our emptiness.

K.G.

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