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Rainbowdust
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0 posted 2003-01-26 04:21 AM


Sometimes I cry for innocent lives lost,
for people caught between the greater good and the cost.
Sometimes I'm angry for children born,
to unloving parents, in countries war-torn
Sometimes I feel sorry for those who don't know,
how much lighter they'd feel, if they just let it go...
Sometimes I hate what we're doing to the earth
for that baby elephant, whose mother was shot after his birth,
Sometimes I feel frustrated, by a world that's unfair
and for those who fight against it, who will get nowhere.
Sometimes I ache for what can never be
and I feel the shackles of those who aren't free...
Sometimes I weep for a dead little bird,
who sang with its soul, a song nobody heard
Sometimes I write, in the clouds, or the dirt
I dream and I laugh... and sometimes... I just hurt.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-26 04:25 AM


me too
regards2you
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2 posted 2003-01-26 10:57 AM




Shireen,

I enjoy your poetry a great deal and I'm glad you posted this here. It is beautiful. The sentiment, heartfelt.


Hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-01-26 11:04 AM


Rainbowdust
A delicate write, a delicate read, a delicate seed, well done.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-26 11:31 AM


Shireen, I'm glad that you re-posted here, too. I enjoyed reading this very much. I could tell it is heart-felt....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2003-01-26 02:12 PM


sometimes i do too, and sometimes i feel helpless as i stand by,
but even in small ways, even something minor as throwing a can in a food donations box helps, a coat in a clothes drive bin, not bagging your groceries and forgoing a tree, feeding the cold stray cats outside your home, without worrying about the nosy neighbor saying something, things like this and that. add up, and you seem like a caring person


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