Open Poetry #24 |
Mistaken |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I've been mistaken, for a happy child. I've been repeated, as a sad child. I've been mistaken, as a stupid child. But all I really am, Is a grown child, almost 18. That hasn't quite found her way. I am lost in this time, that is floating by so fast. I am trapped in this rain that falls so cold to the ground. I am beaten to death with these drops of liquid called tears, I am bleeding from my thoughts. I'm trapped in a hole and burying deep. I can't see the way out from this hole that engulfs me lost in the trench lost in my mind I've been mistaken. Here yes I have Mistaken, I am taken. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Something I could relate to...Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it greatly! Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Hello, Krys. I haven't met you before this is a little late but welcome to the boards. Also, the is a weird feelign to have but probably one a lot of people have. Well see you around. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I have encountered that in others and probably felt it too among loved ones or strangers who try and see similarities or like to 'identify' with what you appear to be to them..funny there is SO MUCH misconception especially between cultures that are insulated, let alone within one's own culture..be gentle with yourself..such are learning times |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
hmm, I am not qwite sure what you are trying to say but yes cultures are very different and feelings react in differently in different cultures. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah Kellie, it's hard. You'll make it! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
hopefully. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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