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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Passivity Inertia wrought me to this spot. Its net has caught me in its hold. A silken thread with Gordian knot Perhaps because I’m growing old Inhibition never a threat Now lies within my fantasy. It holds me in a timing debt And sends me qualms of agony. It does not wake but lets me sleep. A nothing stay within the gray. With too much time in nothings reap. There’s little left to make my way. It whispers soft of my demise. Lullabies in sleepy rhymes And holds me in a hypnotize That speaks to me of bygone times. Inertia bland my way today Ambrosia of the sands slipway |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aw Sy? Is it that cold that inertia has set in? Love the rhyming...but cheer up! Or I'll have to get some little Moth Queen to sic Randy on you... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Each day is an entity unto itself, dear Sy... You make every one of them special...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can't remember starting my mornings without you Sy. Wonderful read this cold winter's day. ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine OH not that, I'll be good. LOL  Nan Awe, you went and told the truth. Now what am I going to do? Nancy, And I hope you never do. LOL & Hugs |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dont worry Sy...I'm not ready to give Randy back...its so cold here, hes keeping me mothy toes warm....and besides---I've almost got him housebroken!!  LOLNow if I can just do something about his snoring!! He snorts flames each time he does!! LOL Gives new meaning to a singed moth.  A silken thread with Gordian knot COULD THAT LINE BE ANY COOLER? *ww* |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
*starts to shiver while reading this* there's a cold hidden in your write; chear up and keep blessing us with your writes  Hugs, Kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perhaps because I’m growing old Oh,Seymour...I think not. You have an inner child more active and ageless than anyone I have known. To-morrow is another day. thanks once again for a wonderful read. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, it's just the cold...everything will be back to normal soon.......  It's supposed to start warming up again tomorrow. Just rest and stay warm.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Glad Randy is behaving himself. Put a pan of water above his head and he'll heat it up for you. It's cold down here too but nothing like where you are. Stay well and warm. WWRS Kelly, Thank you for the read and reply. Your answers chases away the Inertia. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, A cheerful reply, thank you, I'll do my best. garysgirl Got the heat on and doing my best. LOL thank you. |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
That's really nice "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eromyna Glad you enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Inertia should be banned from a life and life should be verdictless, I believe carpe diem should be our Song of Solomon and Hakuna Matata our anthem! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank nyou for sharing! Mayn love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Wise choice, thank you. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, I always enjoy your writing, im not so familiar with this cold weather you all speak of, but can tell you I do not want to encounter it! Here's a big warm hug sent your way, really it's eighty today here  Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad Seymour...wow, I liked this one... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--I have felt a little of this too, it is troublesome and blue. Your amazing poetry is always new, and lifts my spirits like morning dew.   |
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