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The White Glove - special request
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The White Glove - special request |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The White Glove Cannot you see it? That perfect, stark white glove for opera, she is pulling it on just now, slowly, with intent, onto her left hand. Her right hand’s fingers caress lightly her left wrist, slightly tugging, gently easing the glove up her silken arm, then smoothing the gossamer-like cotton of the glove, with her right hand, oblivious, ‘tho it is gloveless. And the art of her is just like a portrait unfinished |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - your poetry is like a portrait framed and complete... BC |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - Yes, I can see this perfectly!! Just lovely. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You do wonderful thinks with nuance and word pictures. I just see her preparing for "Phantom of the Opera", recalling her own lost love. Perhaps she wears only one glove in memory of him? KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! I love this...lovely images. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A very clear image with tender words. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful, Karilea. The images are so clear. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, I also could see the Lady with the white glove, all dressed up in her evening gown... Oh, it's black, in my mind's eye........  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent! What a beautiful form. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! just beautiful! glad you answered that request! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-26-2003 05:09 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh! Oh! This passes inspection. Indeed it does. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The entire visage could be a wonderful piece of art...  |
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