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bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida

0 posted 2003-01-25 07:51 PM



They said I was a rat
A traitor to the clan
Everyone knows
and I dont have a clue
The father is down
but not out
and I am at fault

The Capo said lets take a ride
To find safe haven
and mattresses
Its gonna be a war
and we need to prepare

The Capo said lets go back
the boss needs to be advised
He needs to water the weeds
as I watch the backwaters
I smell the foul marsh at low tide
and wonder whats for dinner

I heard the pop
and felt the burn
as I slumped against the wheel
and as I drifted off
and shed my mortal coil
the last thing heard was
Leave tha car but dont fuhget da cannoli's

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-01-25 09:58 PM


yo , like what's up with this.
you writing a sopranos episode?

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
2 posted 2003-01-25 10:04 PM


Godfather actually.....just can't get enough of a good cannoli!
Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
3 posted 2003-01-25 11:27 PM


Hehe. Wierd. But good.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-26 03:23 AM


dang! powerful!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-01-26 07:25 AM



I immediately had The Godfather in mind...
excellent imagery.

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