Open Poetry #24 |
Forever In My Heart |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am often left in awe At the miracle of birth Or when I see the first daffodil As it breaks through the earth I am entranced by the morning In the early hours of dawn When the birds come to my garden I watch them feeding on the lawn I am fascinated by the ocean And the incoming tides As the warm winds embrace me I let the sun be my guide I am seduced by the sunset Where two lovers come to be As they tenderly kiss each other The sun sets below the sea I am amazed by the moon As it casts it's white light In the quiet of the evening Such a beautiful sight I am captivated by your being You are my lover and my friend Within my heart you'll live eternally My love for you has no end I am in motion |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How beautiful to mix the love of nature with the love of another. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love daffodils so much and the daffodil is actually a flower that deeply inspired me and touched my heart when I began to write so I'd lay in the daffodil field to gather nectar of lovely thoughts to write about! (kiss on cheek) may true love always whisper in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Suetang, Thank you for such a lovely poem. Yes, I too am in awe and admire your capitavation. SG |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sue - This was a true pleasure to read. Lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful, Sue. I love the poem and the picture. I've been trying to get some pictures with my poems, and Nancy's been helping me. I just can't seem to get it right, yet. Maybe I'll learn exactly what I'm doing wrong soon. It adds so much to the poem. Thank you... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Enjoyed - I like your style, Sue... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you got it right! beautiful piece, simple things in life sometimes we forget or take for granted...cherish every moment, yes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts.......enjoyed it very much! Charisma |
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