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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-25 05:03 PM

So free, the wild child that will run ‘til fully spent
To be so restless in the day to day of discontent
But then, a gentle stroke upon the cheek of here I am
Again, the mighty lion settles down beside the lamb

In small append when you intend to let me see
And once again the darker side exposed attests to me
Yet when into your eyes I speak contented softer sighs
Bet then, a deep relief abates to soothe in sudden realize

So free, the gentle way our fingertips so sweetly brush
To be so certain of the feelings buoyant in a certain flush
But then, without a doubt the most and least to want so well
Again, the mighty lion purrs about my dreams un-ceased to dwell

Copyright Kkh 1/25/03

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

1 posted 2003-01-25 05:48 PM

This is very nicely done. I like the rhythm and the flow. I admire the ability to do that. Enjoyed the read.

SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-01-25 05:57 PM

(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is lovely, sweet friend, I believe when the lion finds peace with the lamb such harmony always will shine in ones heart! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

3 posted 2003-01-25 05:57 PM

Sincerely, this is a wonderfuly done piece. Loved how your words wove a beautiful tapestry. Through and through a lovely poem.

Smaller, obviousely, can be better.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-01-25 06:39 PM

In small append when you intend to let me see
And once again the darker side exposed attests to me

Oh Yes!!!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-01-25 06:44 PM

Like this a great deal. Lovely, as usual.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-01-25 06:54 PM

enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-01-25 06:56 PM

Kathleen, this is just beautiful, as always with your work......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-01-25 08:19 PM

ThisDiamond - this is excellent, one of your best that I have read...

BC

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

9 posted 2003-01-25 09:29 PM

The words flowed like a gentle breeze warming the soul.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2003-01-25 10:26 PM

very sensual and woven nicely together start to finish

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-01-26 04:51 AM

deep, very good!

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