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Open Poetry #24

For MY Shadow

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-25 07:17 AM

For MY Shadow

I tip toe
on the edge
of a shadow
this bond ties
the lacing
of my shoes
his whispers
are soft
as kisses
his words
sometimes become
my muse

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

1 posted 2003-01-25 07:38 AM

oh, i do like this.

well spoken... it is nice to have such a relationship.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-01-25 08:46 AM

'Tis good to be followed by a muse..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-01-25 08:59 AM

1slick_lady
Interesting shadow, enjoyed.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-01-26 01:25 AM

I like this. I just assigned my 6th graders to write a free verse about shadows.. I like it.~~

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-26 03:17 AM

yes

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-01-27 07:31 AM

your usual..tight composition... this with a tender feel..
I enjoyed

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