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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-22 02:13 AM


ShadowTrilogy III

A million words
to choose from
though all I've
ever wanted
were three
and someone
to say them to me

Last from me maybe for awhile, take care everyone.


[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-22-2003 02:29 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-22 02:40 AM


Yes, Raph, those three words are very welcome to hear, if said in sincerity.


Why, is this one your last one for awhile? Just where
do you think you are you going???

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-22 02:42 AM


you can't go anywhere...that's not fair!




would you stay if I said I love you?

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-01-22 06:56 AM


words are bullshit
at times,
they dont mean everything,
yeah, theyre pretty, big deal.
he gave me a dozen roses, with an "im sorry" and i love u, big deal.

words are hollow at times

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2003-01-22 09:50 AM


sometimes, words mean everything, when you need to hear or say them...so I have 3 for you, "don't go away" (yes, more hugs)
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-22 10:07 AM


away? is there such a place to go to..for once you are there....you aren't away.. you are there... perhaps here is where you could stay a while...and continue to write so we can enjoy and see the inner piece parts of another human...

I do not always get to the commenting....but I do read..and I do enjoy


serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-01-22 11:08 AM


smile.

Not if I can help it.

I'm gonna come typing after you yanno.

Rumor has it, that I am relentless too...


Connel
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7 posted 2003-01-22 11:10 AM


Enjoyed every word.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-01-22 09:11 PM


Thank you so much everybody, you all touched me greatly today by writing such kind words and for reaching out. Take care and I'll see you soon. I have such immense respect and warm feelings for you all  here.
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-01-23 01:42 PM


Raph, if no one is saying those three words to you, then please say them to yourself!
You are a beautiful person both inside and out (from the photo you posted!!!).

We love you!

EA

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-01-23 02:06 PM



Don't you dare disappear now!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-01-23 02:29 PM


Aenimal
Very good write, well done.

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Gaia
12 posted 2003-01-23 03:27 PM


Come back soon. I miss you. I know those aren't the three words you want. I have no doubt you will hear them, perhaps when you least expect. Meanwhile?
here is my poet sisterly  "I love you!"

Salty
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13 posted 2003-01-23 05:28 PM


Hey!!  Where do you think you're goinG??
I just added you to my library and now your leaving??????     Well come back very soon, or bettet yet ....just don't go.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

BluesSerenade
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14 posted 2003-01-23 09:56 PM


It is the greatest gift of all to be loved,
but we both know it doesn't come easy and certainly not cheap.  I hear you on this.

Be well Raph, and just know you can go home again!  I've left a couple times myself and then turned around and chalked it up to a spell I was having at the time.  Because in the end I felt that much more alone.  This makes me sad, but only you know what's best for you.  Take your time, perhaps that's all you need to find your way back.  

Me and my soap box, get off it bluesy~  

visitvenus
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15 posted 2003-01-27 04:34 AM


You better hurry back!  Your poems soothe my soul, remind me I'm not alone, and comfort my heart!

Come back soon!!!!  

-Venus

passing shadows
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16 posted 2003-01-27 04:35 AM


yeah! come back! we left the light on for you!
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