Open Poetry #24 |
Three |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ShadowTrilogy III A million words to choose from though all I've ever wanted were three and someone to say them to me Last from me maybe for awhile, take care everyone. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-22-2003 02:29 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Raph, those three words are very welcome to hear, if said in sincerity. Why, is this one your last one for awhile? Just where do you think you are you going??? "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you can't go anywhere...that's not fair! would you stay if I said I love you? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
words are bullshit at times, they dont mean everything, yeah, theyre pretty, big deal. he gave me a dozen roses, with an "im sorry" and i love u, big deal. words are hollow at times |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sometimes, words mean everything, when you need to hear or say them...so I have 3 for you, "don't go away" (yes, more hugs) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
away? is there such a place to go to..for once you are there....you aren't away.. you are there... perhaps here is where you could stay a while...and continue to write so we can enjoy and see the inner piece parts of another human... I do not always get to the commenting....but I do read..and I do enjoy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. Not if I can help it. I'm gonna come typing after you yanno. Rumor has it, that I am relentless too... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Enjoyed every word. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you so much everybody, you all touched me greatly today by writing such kind words and for reaching out. Take care and I'll see you soon. I have such immense respect and warm feelings for you all here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Raph, if no one is saying those three words to you, then please say them to yourself! You are a beautiful person both inside and out (from the photo you posted!!!). We love you! EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't you dare disappear now! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Very good write, well done. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Come back soon. I miss you. I know those aren't the three words you want. I have no doubt you will hear them, perhaps when you least expect. Meanwhile? here is my poet sisterly "I love you!" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Hey!! Where do you think you're goinG?? I just added you to my library and now your leaving?????? Well come back very soon, or bettet yet ....just don't go. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is the greatest gift of all to be loved, but we both know it doesn't come easy and certainly not cheap. I hear you on this. Be well Raph, and just know you can go home again! I've left a couple times myself and then turned around and chalked it up to a spell I was having at the time. Because in the end I felt that much more alone. This makes me sad, but only you know what's best for you. Take your time, perhaps that's all you need to find your way back. Me and my soap box, get off it bluesy~ |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
You better hurry back! Your poems soothe my soul, remind me I'm not alone, and comfort my heart! Come back soon!!!! -Venus |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah! come back! we left the light on for you! |
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