Open Poetry #24 |
Plant My Feet |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Plant My Feet I need to know where it is I stand I can’t love the fantasy of blowing sand loneliness walks upon the grains of desert my feet need the feel of dirt "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i want a bit of both, thoughtful thoughts |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
you know pressure points, right? well, you have found one of them with this . . . and the sand keeps moving and there is no solid ground |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, that's where the nutrients and water fruit the earth, where the sand is nothing but particles and ashes of everything that ever walked and fell there before! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
This was very powerful in simply beautiful words! Nice write, enjoyed! Dennis |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
As number 1, top of everything A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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