Open Poetry #24 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
![]() He said he would bring me diamonds cool and sweet with wind against the beige flutter of my heart he promised forever with no end he said the daylight was a perfect set to lay with me in cool grass green a gale of trees were in my view in my eyes he saw them lean across the length of love he held me with clear and glistening seal in wealth of treasure touched by sun I knew his words were real |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful Martie.. And it does look like diamonds in the grass in the picture..amazing! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very touching, Martie, Enjoyed. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You will have NO idea, ever, of the fill that you have given me... and what homesickness swept over me... every place I have ever lived, and there have been a few... have each given me special memories, including this one from you.... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful, Martie... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Martie. ![]() learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Some how you always get your message across. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this made me smile imagining the spring green and the bluebirds chirping! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
against the beige flutter of my heart ======================== YOU always do that... HOW do you always do it is what I wanna know. *smacking me mothy muse* ![]() ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me wanna roll around nekkid in it! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Your photo only comes up as a little x on my pewt but the picture of beauty and love you paint with your words shines brightly.Enjoyed. Live like it's your last day... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You really know how to make a girl yearn to lie and dream upon that lovely cool green grass... ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - you just write wonders you know - you say things that are wordless in our minds but when we read you images and words and thoughts overflow in us - thanks - Paul |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just perfect Martie. Love this. Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So very beautiful, Martie! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
naturally you found trust...so I guess..neat write ![]()
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