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Martie
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0 posted 2003-01-22 08:52 PM





He said he would bring me diamonds
cool and sweet with wind

against the beige flutter of my heart
he promised forever with no end

he said the daylight was a perfect set
to lay with me in cool grass green  

a gale of trees were in my view
in my eyes he saw them lean

across the length of love he held me
with clear and glistening seal

in wealth of treasure touched by sun
I knew his words were real

© Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-22 08:57 PM


Perfectly beautiful Martie..
And it does look like diamonds in the grass
in the picture..amazing!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-01-22 08:57 PM




Very touching, Martie, Enjoyed.

Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2003-01-22 09:10 PM


You will have NO idea, ever,
of the fill that you have given me...
and what homesickness swept over me...

every place I have ever lived, and there
have been a few...
have each given me special memories,
including this one from you....

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4 posted 2003-01-22 09:14 PM


How beautiful, Martie...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-22 09:15 PM


Martie.   so lovely!

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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6 posted 2003-01-22 09:46 PM


Martie
Some how you always get your message across.

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7 posted 2003-01-22 09:55 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this made me smile imagining the spring green and the bluebirds chirping! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-01-22 11:14 PM


against the beige flutter of my heart
========================

YOU always do that...
HOW do you always do it is what I wanna know.
*smacking me mothy muse*


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9 posted 2003-01-23 03:23 AM


makes me wanna roll around nekkid in it!
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10 posted 2003-01-23 03:27 AM


Your photo only comes up as a little x on my pewt but the picture of beauty and love you paint with your words shines brightly.Enjoyed.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Nan
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11 posted 2003-01-23 08:41 AM


You really know how to make a girl yearn to lie and dream upon that lovely cool green grass...
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12 posted 2003-01-23 07:02 PM


Martie - you just write wonders you know - you say things that are wordless in our minds but when we read you images and words and thoughts overflow in us - thanks - Paul
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13 posted 2003-01-23 07:41 PM


Just perfect Martie. Love this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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14 posted 2003-01-23 11:21 PM


So very beautiful, Martie!
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15 posted 2003-01-24 12:35 PM


naturally you found trust...so I guess..neat
write


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