Three poems of a different sort....

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Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-23 03:06 PM

Greetings to you all, these next three are, somewhat, different type of poems when compared to the others I have placed in the forum.

~The Facaded~
Put a smile on your face,
To keep all those people up to pace.
Thinking inside that all the things you do,
Come so easy to you,
You keep on striding,
All this to cover a sweet pain that no one cares to hear,
To try and put out what you cannot put in,
Instilling confidence in those around you,
When you can't even reasure yourself that your loved,
Or stop yourself from crying out into the night,
For someone to share your love with,
This life with,
To finally wash away,
The Facade,
Cover up your fears,
Dress them well,
Keep that sile,
As it kills you to think that you might forever be alone,
So you cling to a darkness,
A comforting shadow that your pains go to,
Draw to,
So keep on stumbling,
Looking,
Searching as you softly sob silently wanting to find someone,
To which you could go to,
So love to,
That's shares that love with you,
So,
One day,
You could drop,
The Facade.

~When one really equelled two~
When one really equelled two,
I,
We,
You,
Me,
One in two,
Two as one,
When one really equelled two,
As when we were together,
And I was yours,
As one,
And you as mine,
To make two,
This was,
Was,
When one really equelled two,
Now we're not,
Two broken hearts,
Thrown aside into the turmoil of the world,
Only to find,
That you and I,
Were not as,
When one really equelled two,
When I was not alone,
When I didn't need to sob each night,
Hoping for a time again,
When one really equelled two,
Me and you as one,
When one really equelled two.

~Feeling~
Feeling through the hell,
Feeling through that shell,
As it blisters through the air,
And falls apart,
All frown,
As the sacrifice is never knowing,
What might be true,
Against the falcity of the light,
When compared to the darkness,
Thus,
While all is oft forgot,
To commonly,
Those few stars that truly shine,
Turn away to become nothing really important to see,
And so,
So few,
Feelings,
Are left to give them,
Love hope and purity of dream fall short for them,
At times,
It all fallls apart far to easily,
But it's all because,
We just don't show them,
Feelings.

Anyway, here are my poems for the day, hope you enjoyed. They are a bit different then the others I have read to you all here in PIP.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-01-23 04:03 PM

these are great, and I enjoyed reading them, but I think it would be easier for folks to read them, one per post. That way we aren't overwhelmed.

And let folks get to know you, jump in, we won't bite, read and reply to others so they can get to know your name, and then be more aware of you and read you in like kind.

Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

2 posted 2003-01-23 04:08 PM

Thank ye for the advice, I think that your probably right and I should space them out. As well as allowing others to get to know me a bit, and to try and comment on some other pieces. And in anycase, thanks.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-23 04:14 PM

Joel, these are great pieces..
Yes, perhaps next time you could post them one at a time..
You can have three posts a day before we even think of coming after you.

Then..we are nice about it...
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-01-23 04:16 PM

LOL at Nancy....
don't let her scare you
and you are most welcome, we all had to start and be new here once, relax and enjoy!!

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

5 posted 2003-01-23 04:18 PM

i like the feel of your work

i think i am simply identifying with your sentiment, for the rhythm of your words felt familiar to me, almost like an echo from a friend

thanks for sharing your feelings so openly.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-23 04:24 PM

It does get exciting, doesn't it? lol

Really though, it's loads of fun to read all the different styles of writings here. You never catch up. I'm trying now, and as soon as I get through replying to one poem and submit, another one is on the board...

I need to go now to a couple of pages back and see what I've been missin... Bye for now...

Ethel....garysgirl

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-01-23 04:25 PM

LOL..I was just kidding.
A little Canadian humour for a fellow Canuck!

Welcome aboard again Joel.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

8 posted 2003-01-23 04:44 PM

Well, Abbe I hope that the echoes you are recieving aren't a bad thing, I wouldn't want to bring up any bad memories with my writing.

And Enchantress, I don' mind bein' bugged, lol, as seriouse as most o' my poems are, I can be funny and light hearted if I feel.

And don' worry Sea, I don' scare easily, as long as you guys an' gals don' say directly to me that I'm not to post again, then I'll continue to resonably post.

And so, I look forward to adding more tomorrow, Take care everyone. -=bows=-

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

9 posted 2003-01-23 05:38 PM

Enjoyed your work new person lol....i'm kind of new here myself actually..compared to some anyway.

I liked all three, but the first one is my favorite.

~Salty~

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

10 posted 2003-01-23 06:04 PM

Gah! Now I really feel silly. The Title for the first one is supposed to be ~The Facade~ with no extra D at the end. -=hits his forehead on the desk infront of him=-

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

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