Open Poetry #24 |
I Adore You |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I feel gratitude toward God, a means of expressing my thank you to Him, for, my need of your time, no matter how infinitesimally met, and, for you giving that of which you've so little, as you struggle to balance your all. You satisfy my soul, and, fill me with a ~kind~ of complete only ~you~ can provide. I adore you, so! . Precious, daughter of mine. . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-22-2003 01:07 PM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Cool poem.. Enjoyed the read. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, this is really sweet....a very loving poem to your daughter. I enjoyed reading it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks for reading, Connell. I spent some quality time with my daughter yesterday; though short, I realized how much I have missed her. She's been extremely busy and going through some rough times I couldn't help with and I never have enough time here, let alone there, though I would have helped if I could have. Yesterday was somehow very, particularly special and I'm left with one sense of fulfillment only our children can give, no matter how short of a time period, it was special and an unknown need on my part as well as hers. Thank you again for reading. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I can understand this well, even though mine is 14...time goes so quick, sigh |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling...you expressed it so very well. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they are work for sure, but they are worth it the princess and the prince, one doesnt know how to boil water yet, and the other one cant find his way out of the piles of clothes and junk in his room, then again, im not exactly a domestic goddess, so thats that.but i love them to death |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is beautiful Made me smile! This is something I'm sure every daughter wishes her Mom would write to and about her. Its amazing how time flies isn't it? Tomorrow I see my mom, finally, for a Christmas Much enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat...Very lovingly written...I sure know what you mean. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Pat, this is filled with unconditional love. love and friendship between a mother and daughter is such a precious thing, i know i appreciate it, theres nothing in the world like it. i'm sure your daughter feels the same. a pleasure to read. lots of love, gemma xxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me shed a tear as your daughter is so lucky to have a loving golden-hearted mom...you! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Dixie, Nancylee, Michele, Martie, Vandana, and Noah.... thanks to all of you for reading and replying. I rarely write of current events, but this just touched my heart and kinda needed to write it. Glad you could all relate...thanks... GG/Alyssa, When I went to answer you yesterday on your Walls poem, I was unable to call up PIP with my Regards2You username....from abt. 8:30 Am thr. 9:20, my time. Not sure if others had this problem, but I couldn't get Passions to come up. I used a different user name and search engine and did manage to get PIP...though that name is not registered so couldn't comment to you.....eventually Regards2You began working..strange!!! Assuming others had the problem, too. I have problems using this site. Sporadically, wonder why.... In any event, am glad you are seeing your mom today, tho. don't know your circumstances...I still stand by what I said in Walls...if you E-mailed me, I am sure I'd be tempted to e-mail you...so, instead... 'do' what is in front of you...as ever, your friend and wishing you well, keep writing, no matter what...I do enjoy your poetry and may you soon get the healing and help you need...God bless and hugs... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat, this was lovely. You expressed the depth of your love for your daughter so incredibly well. I identify with your sentiments so completely "with regards" to my own daughters. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your words! Warm hugs, Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Linda, Thank you for your kind, warm heart and am glad you relate so well. Also, am glad to see you back. I need to go rest, but hope you will be posting; if so, I'll get back later today/tonight. I missed you, hope you are doing OK. hugs and love and God bless, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nicely said, Pat, I'm sure she loves this. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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