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Open Poetry #24

With you

Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

0 posted 2003-01-23 10:35 AM

Somewhere out of your vision
just slightly out of view
there’s a woman
so in love with you

Your eyes don’t seem to focus
your heart somehow without a clue
there’s a woman
so in love with you

Your mind doesn’t seem to get it
but this isn’t something new
there’s a woman
so in love with you

Her heart has been aching
trying to get the message through
there’s a woman
so in love with you

When people try to tell you
you don’t believe it’s true
there’s a woman
so in love with you

So tonight there will be no guessing
there’ll be no doubt when I get through
there’s a woman
so in love with you...

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-01-23 10:41 AM

Can't help but smile at this. Wishing you every success. Enjoyed.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

2 posted 2003-01-23 10:45 AM

thank you

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2003-01-23 06:26 PM

Sometimes it almost takes a knock upside the head before we realize that a woman loves us. I really like your writing a LOT and can't wait to hear more from you.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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