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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2003-01-23 09:11 AM


I've always thought about it,
To touch a star so bright,
And finally got my wish,
Late one Friday night.

At first I was quite nervous,
Then without a fear,
I reached out and touched the breast,
Of pop-star Britney Spears.

If you wish upon a star,
That might turn out okay,
If you reach out and touch one,
They'll haul your ass away!

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-01-23 09:14 AM


Toe,
I've learned to never mix fantasy with reality. LOL thank you my friend.

suthern
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2 posted 2003-01-23 09:25 AM


ROFLMAO... Only you. LOL

Now leave those younguns alone... I don't look so horribly bad if you close your eyes... and I won't even send you to jail! LOL Of course, I won't let you go, either... so you might prefer the lighter sentence? LOL

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-23 09:36 AM




Sy said it best. Enjoy your humor.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Lady In White
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4 posted 2003-01-23 09:37 AM



LOL...be careful Toe...
you saw what happened
to Scott Ritter!

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-23 09:39 AM


(chuckling) Well..were they real?
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-01-23 10:06 AM


Mr. Toe....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-01-23 10:13 AM


How'd you get away with this in "open"?

You make your words come to life, to my dismay on this one.
M

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-01-23 10:42 AM


Toe,

You have a way of adding spice,
To our Passion's slice of life!

Toe-rrifically punny!

Warm hugs,
Linda


Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 2003-01-23 10:44 AM


Nakedthoughts.....your dismay?...Are you really Britney?...
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-01-24 08:20 AM


you dirtydog,
here i moved u up,
shes not jailbait, you could dream of her, conscius free

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-01-24 08:26 AM


Toe,
You spoke from experience, mine was pure fantasy. LOL my friend

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