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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-01-23 06:27 PM

Knowing

I know
your breath
I have
seen it
against
the glass
why are
you surprised
I see
the reflection



"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-01-24 07:04 AM


They can never seem to figure it out...
Thank you Helen!
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
2 posted 2003-01-24 07:17 AM


Reflection
More than shadow
Detection
Less than you would know
Emotion
More than you can see
Elation
Even when it can be
Sensation
Frost on the window

Gloom
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 2003-01-24 08:16 AM

I'm not surprised..it's just not knowing?
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