Open Poetry #24 |
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Ms Orleans |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Ms Orleans I crunch upon the steps of street to venture where dirt and innocence meet to drink this dark I gladly give up my trust lured by ghostly kisses that sip my lust this city shines through trash at night powdered by du Monde’s sprinkling in light where beauty dances upon the dirt earth bound and free spirits step to her concert romance me now oh city sweet you hold my heart beneath your concrete "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Written by a true N'awlin's lady |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo.... now why didn't I learn to write like this while I was down there? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) My my my, there's certainly been a lot of poems written about New Orleans today, and it's not even Mardi Gras! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love that city, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is wonderful. Enjoyed! Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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