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He waited for you...
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He waited for you... |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
He waited for you... there by the trees as the morning dew dripped down off the leaves alone; he waited for you He waited for you... standing silent tasting drops of past reflection rolling down his face in a lonely place he waited for you He waited for you... there by the pond where blades of grass collected under his feet and flowers from the garden permeated the air so sweet he waited for you He waited for you... with bated breath whispered your name softly, slowly again and again as time passed in quiets rasp he waited for you He waited for you... there with his soul and there with his mind yet only you would know what he would come to find absent without care love would never share wonder if you knew he waited there for you He waited for you... in just a split second as the chamber turned the flash sought reckoning and his heart for you still yearned final problem solved for all that were concerned Wondered if you knew? Or of the news you'd learned? he waited...there for you Copyright ©-2001 Dennis Hicks |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A long, long time ago... there was a Dennis in my life... I know he never waited for me, but if he had? I would have liked it to sound like this, and to know that he found me at the end of the story.... |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
I was touched by your response. I'm sure you were his Sunshine  Thank you so much. Still wondering about a post you made to one of my poems a couple weeks back. If you find some time, and find it, perhaps you'll answer |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dennis, This is very, very touching. Just about the time I find my favorite of yours, I go and find another. Enjoyed this much. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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