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Once Lost
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Once Lost |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sometimes, the promises would linger on the wind To captivate me more than lover's lips And rise me to my feet in trail of whispers Never was I leaving, only going to the prism's ebb A calling of my own to drive in single destination To find the hollow where my heart would rest Sometimes, the wind to softly knock upon my heart's door And to the woods I travel, and to the trees I pray For I will never be apart from what of you shares me Never was I leaving, only going to the prism's ebb Copyright Kkh 1/21/03 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Once Lost, now found and kept... prisms and all... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Ahhhhh.. Nice poem.. I enjoyed the read.. Thankyou for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I still see the prism light occasionally and I know this feeling of yearning, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
gentle touch of the wind as it seems to speak to us in truths we may not have realized before, this was whimsical and enchanting |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Never was I leaving, only going to the prism's ebb A calling of my own to drive in single destination To find the hollow where my heart would rest I will never tire of the comfort that your poetry lends. Thank you for this gem TD~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Neat touch of what the breeze can bring...if I may make a suggestion your third stanza might be better with a would rather than to in the first line to give action to the line and replicate the opening line of the poem as well, indirectly..just an idea  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, as all your poetry is, this is beautiful. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful, yes...I can't think of another word |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thanks everyone...and thanks Ecrivan... I like and appreciate your suggestion very much. ThisDiamond |
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