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Plutonic Relation |
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bluRaven Junior Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 18Richmond, VA |
Secrets shared of secret desire. Funfilled laughs with feverish anxiety, Truthful truths may be told by a little white liar, Who can not express true feeling. The love is there, the vibes are felt, But it can't be shared and can't be dealt. Closer than close, wanting to be more, But will happen? What will the future have in store? Boy and girl both burning with passion Fear to unlock the tenderness within, For it may disrupt what has been created. What is the creation? The creation of peace, serenity, and friendship. One does not envy the other, but they are Envious of each other. Joyful joys being lifted higher, but Both are careful not to reveal all feeling. He's willing yet she is still waiting- Hearts need filling and time is healing... Hoping it is not too late. "~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Alicia.  this was filled with many thoughts, at a rapid pace.it had a force to it.quick thinking and raw. though i didnt completely understand it, which that doesnt matter, cos i enjoyed it anyway.welcome to passions by the way!  lots of love, gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. An interesting write here...gushing with the quickened emotional flows of love and longing. Nicely done. ThisDiamond |
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