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Fever Burn
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Fever Burn |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Drifting in and out of thought each one weakens my strength while trying to put them to rest without a place to take them to they come quietly and keep me still slipping underneath my skin. Like a feathered blanket of calm gentle and unwavering thoughts of you spread over me as my temperature rises both hot and cold and willing. Fighting an inner battle and the onset of sudden chills wishing to be kept warm or the right dose of medicine that is mine for the taking promising some relief from the pain that aches and the fever that burns inside of me. *I've got it bad*  |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Hi Lor! You crack me up with your last line! Comparing an attraction to the boogie-woogie flu,? *s* You have been writing brilliantly, Lor, and smack my hand for not telling you earlier, ok? At times i look at your words and my mouth hangs open in admiration. Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I had it all bad, now I just feel bad (sad sigh) I understand this fever and how difficult it can be to bear, now all I desired is cold, I wish for true love to always sing to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Good poem. Enjoyed. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
got it bad, you must be getting it real good, girlfriend! liked this mucho |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Lori, sounds like you have a bit of a "flu"? I hope not, just take avery warm vanilla scented bath and let the heat of the water draw out the fever. Hugss M *I still am having trouble staying awake to be on here when you are;( |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, I've had this feeling before......also had the same feeling with the flu last week. Those feelings are very similar, aren't they?  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done.... and here is to hoping the fever...is cured soon.. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
spread over me as my temperature rises both hot and cold and willing. oh ain't it the truth.....clever write~! I really enjoy reading your words, it's got that "real" touch~! *S* Atov~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Lori...sounds like you got it bad alright! Good write...enjoyed the read. Take care...be well.  ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
a spoon full of sugar helps the medicine go down  probably helps a lot when the right person is dosing you.Enjoyed this read MUCHLY!! ~Salty |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - You sure do... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for reading everyone, I appreciate it so much. I'll get back in here and read all you good poets as soon as I shake this bug off, but right now the nyquil is kicking in and I need to lay down. Hugs all around~ |
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