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Always...You
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Always...You |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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And with the rain so too, comes the memory in heartbreak cascade rivulets of remember that sting just now vivid the glimpses of a yesterday wished forgotten until your laughter is recalled your smile and that way you had of looking not just at me but into me like you knew you knew..... I never hid I wanted you to see all that I kept inside my heart for you oh... and it was always........you ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Oh Sue how you have been missed. Now promise to never go away or move again! LOL. This is SO good and I just love the ending! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I would always keep everything I want to share with the one deep in the vault of my heart as I would be hopeless without the whole evidence! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Don't meet me by the "Sea"...meet me by the "Pond That Has No Ripples"...I have something for you... |
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Poetic Bard Member
since 2003-01-22
Posts 84Canada, BC |
Truly, a beautiful piece. Very vivid in the emotions you wished to present with this piece. I loved it, putting it all quite frankly. I look forward to reading more of your pieces. Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling at Toe) Yes...you have been missed and I for one..am very glad to see you back and posting.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
vivid the glimpses of a yesterday wished forgotten until your laughter is recalled your smile Damn you Susan...  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy, thanks so much, and no, not moving again for a while Noah, thank you for always being so kind Toe...you are gonna get in trouble talkin like that  Bard, thanks, that’s awesome, enjoy your time reading and replying, you’ll love it! Ron, and I thank you very much.  Cowboy, just good to see you  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
rivulets of remember =================== LOVE that line!!! but then I love moth poetry I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Honey, trouble is my middle name....My mom used my middle name alot...can ya imagine? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A lovely sea today. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - breathtaking you are, to give so completely... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, welcome back. I've missed you and your beautiful poems. This is a tremendous write. Don't go away again....Marti |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, this is beautiful and the imagery, superb. It's wonderful seeing you here.  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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